Monday, April 30, 2012

Chapter 2: Marianne and Niel Brown

Sorry to burst your bubble, ProxieHunter. I got your comment too late. It did pretty much make my day though.


I had my talk with Niel. I recorded the conversation because I knew I’d post it here anyway:

Silent: So what do you want from me?

NB: You’re recording this?

Silent: You don’t mind.

NB: [There’s a moment of silence before he finally agrees]…I want you to find my sister.

Silent: What? Don’t you think that’s a job for the police, or a private investigator, or someone who’s the least bit qualified?

NB: The police think she was found three months ago.

Silent: …what…

NB: Oh come on, you had to be expecting something like that.

Silent: …well, shit… In that case, I don’t think I want to find her… But… tell me your story.

NB: My sister, Marianne, went missing six months ago. Since she was over 18, the police mostly figured that she just ran off to get away from her family, but she wasn’t that type of person. They investigated. No leads anywhere. It was like she just ceased to exist. Then, three months ago, someone found a body in an abandoned house. It was identified as my sister. It looked like my sister. But that wasn’t my sister.

Silent: I’m pretty sure I already know the answer to this, but… how are you so sure?

NB: She sent me this yesterday. [he hands me a note, I don’t have a scanner, but I’ll see what I can do to post it or recreate it later]

Silent: How do you know it’s not forged?

NB: That’s definitely her handwriting, and that little symbol in the corner is something we came up with to know what our messages were from each other when we played “spies” as kids.

Silent: cute… [I sigh] I suppose I’ll look into it.

NB: Thanks a lot.

Silent: As you said… I don’t have a choice.

And so there’s that.

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